News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?
Since the medieval era, most of the people are habituated to start their day reading the newspaper. The current happenings across the world have become a matter of prime interest among the people of all ages. In my opinion, an individual cannot survive if he is unaware of what is happening in the world. As a result, he has to read or watch the news to stay competitive in the world. however, it is noticed that media focusses more on negative news than positive ones to make more profit; but according to me, it is unfair to keep focussing on just negative news. Instead, news agency should opt balance view by showing all type of news that includes positive stories along with negative topics.
To begin with, it is undeniable that news plays a significant role in molding the thoughts of an individual. Sometimes, a person cannot just stand in a community if he does not know the current affairs. In any profession or career growth, today's man tends to shine out knowledgeable if he is aware of international level happenings. Such individuals see faster growth in their career. Unequivocally, a person knowing less about the countries events seems ignorant and less compatible with others in a group.
Another aspect that worries many people is about negativity spread among the general population due to negative stories in newspapers. Apparently, this news creates fear and insecurity among the citizens, which is not good for the nation to grow. The people would start blaming the government and the ruling party for their situation. Consequently, the people and the administrative body cannot work for the benefit of their country. Although the news cannot be eliminated as they show the true picture of the society; however, this does not mean that whole tabloid should cover only crimes, murders, and rapes occurring in the state.
Furthermore, positive stories create encouragement in youth to do better, which is eminent for the society to prosper. The coverage showing the good work of an individual or community should be given equal importance so that it can set an example for others to follow. For instance, a woman educating slum children or an environmentalist working hard in educating people to protect the globe by lessening the pollutants should be highlighted, which would definitely motivate mass of people to walk on their steps.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that news plays a significant role in our lives and to stay competitive, it is required for each person to remain aware of important happenings around the globe. Moreover, the media department should give a piece of mix news that contains negative as well as equal positive news to encourage the country's population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... news to stay competitive in the world. however, it is noticed that media focusses more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02212389381 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81425669114 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546460176991 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7478701402 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.095238095 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90476190476 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32812906948 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879574322457 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805854070764 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1764810198 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824406022848 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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