Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s opinions and ideas.
Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no question that the social media has been rapidly developed over the last centuries. However, newspapers remain the most popular news resource due to their accessibility. Nevertheless, there is a lot of people who believe that the press articles can make a negative impact on the people’s mindset. personally, I totally agree with this statement and sure that people always need to have alternative sources of information for getting a whole picture of the world.
Undoubtedly, there are several positive points that the newspapers could be characterized. Firstly, as we mentioned before this is the cheapest and easiest way to get a news update. Although if it is very conservative way but even in small far villages without internet access each person can buy or subscribe for newspaper or magazine. Secondly, the press is a good resource for people’s education (especially economic and political ones) because it creates the field for discussion among all segments of the population.
On the other hand, there is a drawback that outweighs all the benefits mentioned above. it is undeniable that could use the social media to rule people’s minds. For example, many governments use the fake news to create the desirable image of the world and influence on the public opinion. especially it is hard to resist for elder people. Thus, due to his conservative mindset they easy become suggestable to other views.
Taking into consideration all mentioned above, I am inclined to think that the negative impacts of wrong interpretation of world picture can be crucial. Therefore, it is very critical to create and support new press with another point of view and alternative social media.
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| 2019-06-19 | multianchor | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98889985935 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5655870889 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136374963608 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416333479577 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343868239421 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791361210759 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280731909582 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.