Now a days food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
It is true that, food forms a very essential part of everyone's life. Many believe that the ease of preparing meals has uplifted the lifestyle of folks. However, I do not agree with the given statement as this trend has exposed humans to diseases.
Firstly, the quality of food is not assured. As the ingredients are delived in packages, there are more chances of adultration in them. Such preparations cast a negative effect on an individual's health. For instance, a survey conducted by health department of Harvard university revealed that the chances of developing cancer has escalated by about 70% during the last decade. Further investigation revealed that the root cause behind this problem is the increased consumption of contaminated foods. Thus, such a trend has deleterious effects on the well being of people.
In addition to it, humans have become lazy and they show least interest in cooking, as they get pre- prepared materials. Moreover, folks have lost their culinary skills. It is because the companies provide public with semi- prepared products, such as frozen foods and an individual just have to follow the instructions on the packet to attain a desirable result. For example, the winner of a cooking show hosted by sony television had zero knowledge about the basic ingredients. He was later interviewed by Telenews, but he failed to name the contents and composition of the packages which he used to prepare his award winning cuisine. Therefore, such a culture has decreased the value of real cooks.
To conclude, cooking might have become easier now a days, but it has deteriorated the lifestyle of people. It is need of the hour to put a limit on such a trend, so that people can lead a happy and healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Line 2, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... revealed that the chances of developing cancer has escalated by about 70% during...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'show the least'.
Suggestion: show the least
...to it, humans have become lazy and they show least interest in cooking, as they get pre- p...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: award-winning
...e packages which he used to prepare his award winning cuisine. Therefore, such a culture has ...
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Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...clude, cooking might have become easier now a days, but it has deteriorated the lifestyle ...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...e, cooking might have become easier now a days, but it has deteriorated the lifestyle ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93174061433 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76354426482 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627986348123 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1874775205 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868092404265 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241349878601 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255940599566 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534981552842 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222101936835 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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