Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of often products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Recently, the need for progression in medicine proves the necessity of a wide variety of experiments and the most prevalent one is animal experiments. A group of people believes that these type of experiments cause animals suffering and it is morally wrong, while opponent argues that it is beneficial for human health.
In the one hand, proponent claimed that animal experiments should be prohibited because of several reasons. The most important reason is that such these experiments on animals like mice or monkeys is morally incorrect because animals have emotions and these experiments cause them suffering, so humans are not allowed to impose suffering on them. Additionally, some of them argue that, for instance, nine out of ten successful experiments on the animal are failed on human beings and they suspect the benefits of these types of research. Thus, they thought suffering animals is not justified and no matter for what reason was.
On the other hand, opponents considered that for development and improvement in medicine and treatment, the animal experiment is justified. Because they believe that these animals are a few numbers of natural populations of animals besides, the result of these experiments could cure dangerous disease such as cancer or HIV so, they think it is worth it. In Addition, they claim that scientists care about the animals suffering and minimize their suffering with new methods and techniques like cooling part of monkeys' brain to reduce their pain. Hence, in my point of view, it is correct to think of animal experiment as a solution to find a cure for the incurable disease.
To conclude, while several compelling arguments on whether animal experiment is justified or not, I profoundly believe that it could be helpful in the field of medicine but for other purposes, it would be morally wrong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16279069767 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77562374096 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518272425249 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.242980258 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.272727273 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447615919358 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187360675444 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741639271654 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291051992815 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434803964963 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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