Nowadays, environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual person or individual country. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every individual across the world has different opinions about handling the environmental issue. While I agree it should be considered as a universal problem, however, it is also a responsibility of every country and citizen of the country to manage the issue.
To begin with, increase in population, deforestation, pollution, extensive industrialization are some of the major cause or this alarming environmental issue. All the developed countries should join hand with the developing countries and under developed countries to reduce the detrimental effects in the universe. As an example,an universal law should be enacted to control deforestation, and industrialization , which will be followed by the countries all around the globe. Obviously these kind of moments will lead to control the pollution as well which is a huge threat for the whole world . Moreover, organizations like UNESCO can actively take part for such global issues create awareness among it is people
Although, it is an international issue, every country and citizen is also responsible to take care of their surroundings. The government should introduce compulsory reduce , reuse and recycle laws for unnatural products. Furthermore, rules and regulations have to be strict, so that people are forced to follow it .Industrial norms have to be framed in such a way that industries should not be built in the agricultural areas and near the rivers. Apart from this, self-discipline from every individual is mandatory to control the situation. People can avoid plastics and buy eco-friendly products, which will be an great step to create an polluted free environment.
To conclude, environmental problems should be handled by local and international authorities as well as by individuals. Every single person should take care of the environment ,moreover, we have to bring up our children to be conscious citizens of a clean and preserved planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48160535117 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31017366342 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7427889136 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165541094242 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635762362344 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526382018958 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117706589359 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440871651649 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.