Nowadays an increasing number of people change their careers during their working period. What are the reasons behind this trend? Is it generally positive or negative development?
A conspicuous feature being globally adapted is the massive shifting of the people from their current jobs to different ones. The primary reasons for such a trend are market fluctuations and developing new sources of income. I certainly accept that it is a positive change.
There are several reasons as to why people are opting for new careers. Primarily, ill-paid jobs or complete loss of jobs in certain sectors of economy. Because of which, people look for new avenues of growth and adapt accordingly to sustain their livelihood. secondly, unsatisfied employees tend to leave their occupation for a new one to meet their own expectations and aspirations. Overall, decline in certain sectors and unsatisfactory working conditions that forces them to shift careers.
I think that it is undoubtedly a constructive development for several reasons. Firstly, it gives the power to break the monotony of the same job and switch to a new one. Secondly, the employees, reeling under the pressure of oppressive employers can resign and dictate their life by having extra skill sets for a new carrier. Not only this but one can easily pursue for lucrative jobs, thus easing their burden of cash crunch. By achieving this, one can get relieved off the part-time jobs. Thus, it has beneficial outcomes, being a tool to achieve job satisfaction.
In conclusion, changing careers is a ubiquitous trend that must be respected as it has practical outcomes in our societies
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 260, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ccordingly to sustain their livelihood. secondly, unsatisfied employees tend to leave th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2719665272 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89045942612 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627615062762 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2906984561 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1879683685 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059955728301 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392169055986 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118182412292 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304297623203 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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