Nowadays it is common for people to follow the latest fashion trends. What could be the possible reasons that influence people to do so? Is this a positive or negative development?
People are getting more and more attracted to modern fashion trends. Despite this is said to have some positive impacts on society. This essay supports the idea that such development is negative more than being positive. The reasons and explanations for this shall be provided with further details.
The rise in number of people after the latest fashion is believed to be psychological in the first place. There is no doubt that looking attractive is not a flaw in someone’s personality. However, back in the days, people who cared about clothing styles were used to belong to the affluent class. Today, this has changed a lot. Many teens, for example, are trying to bond with like – minded people. Thus, they try to express their personality through fashion. At the same time, many youngsters find it glamorous to follow celebrities. The chant of being famous and listened to might be attractive to this group. Although, this might sound acceptable to some parents and elderly, but insights on the reasons behind this might reveal personality problems and lack of confidence too.
The tendency to be following new styles can be seen as negative for both personal and family economics reasons. On an individual level, especially on college students, purchasing the latest clothes and gadgets is a huge time waste. Students have limited time to spend on their studies. Therefore, it is believed that priorities among students have changed. Some are even planning to become models or actors in order to gain more money. Consequently, some analysts and educationalists believe that nowadays students are being mind – corrupted by following new fashion. Concerning family economics, some parents are struggling to supply their sons and daughters with the new stuff they are requesting. It is believed that on the long term, families may face financial repercussion in the sake of making their children look classy and attractive.
To sum up, fashion popularity is increasing nowadays than ever before. There are some personality reasons behind this as being attracted to a certain model or icon. Also, the need to be surrounded by people with similar personality might be an explanation for this trend. However, I firmly believe that this is a drawback for both individuals and families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, look, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, no doubt, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17694369973 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76939936493 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563002680965 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7193749936 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.24 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.92 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294407735365 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761593936787 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620827820097 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198965218561 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639386031458 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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