Nowadays the machines have become more sophisticated to which more and more jobs tasks which involve high physical work are being done by machines. What do you think this development has negative or positive effects?
In this contemporary era, after the dawn of science and technology, humans have been replaced by automated machines. Huge machinery has changed our work-style totally compared to the past. Mainly big industries, which have enormous and heavy metal parts, could be hard or impossible to transfer from one machine to the other at that time computer-controlled machine take place of workers. The change gave us many benefits in positive ways such as precise and better handling of heavy material and highly accurate machining on the hardest material. I shall discuss the good side of it in the coming paragraphs.
In the last 50 years, the development of technology and machinery has been escalated extremely. The first and main positive point of it is that employees in manufacturing and the industrial company can handle a huge piece of parts with the help of an overhead crane. This advancement and development would be fruitful for both the workers as well as the industries. The crane operator can control the movement and position of the heavy metal by using a small remote far from it. Machinery is connected with computers sometimes, which as a result, collect data for further up-gradation in that particular mammoth machine. Stackpole Internation, for the instance, one of the customers of Toyota, has an in-build over-head crane of the capacity of 20 tonnes and fixed robots for material handling.
Secondly, efficiency and precision are extremely high as compared to human beings. When a machine connects with a computer and with proper programming, the machine operator could achieve precise and accurate parts as per the customer's need. Some complex parts could be done with help of machinery only with a short time span. Some machines such as airplanes, nuclear power plants, and the air force need highly accurate parts for their machine and this could be possible only with the help of a computer-operated machine. CNC(Computer Numeric Control) Machine could manufacture a part highly accurate with the range of 2 millimeters.
To wrap up, the machines never could replace humans but it reduces efforts and hard work which was done before in big industries. There are some negative points of machinery, however, it could be eliminated by a proper solution. All in all, robots have changed our life totally and helped us a lot in many ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... would be fruitful for both the workers as well as the industries. The crane operator can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1007751938 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86072770375 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1917346414 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.894736842 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181695331417 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556847746492 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416276035613 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116729122509 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332460471765 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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