Congestion and heavy traffic are two of the most prominent issues faced by most countries at present. My home country India is also a victim of excessive traffic leading to severe congestion in most major cities. This essay discusses the major causes of traffic and how it can be mitigated effectively.
Heavy traffic in India is a result of degrading quality of roads and overpopulation in the country. Due to availability of cheap cars in India, individuals possess multiple vehicles which means more cars on fewer roads. This amplifies burden on the road system. Appropriate steps should be taken by authorities to ensure urban areas are equipped with better quality roads so as to diminish the traffic problems and prevent accidents.
Furthermore, people in India are not afraid to break traffic rules which is a result of lack of regulation by government. Breaking traffic rules adds to misery of already handicapped road traffic management system. For Instance, 1100 of the last 2000 accidents took place due to drivers' negligence. Adding to it are corrupt police officers who often take bribes from people breaking rules. In order to completely eliminate traffic congestion problems, authorities need to be more stringent in the implementation of regulations.
To conclude, though heavy traffic and congestion issues are part and parcel of an overpopulated country like India, steps can be taken to eradicate these problems completely. This will help in making the country a better place for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e equipped with better quality of roads so as to diminish the traffic problems and even ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21292775665 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82885645336 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555133079848 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7348895517 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18163805669 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07038329631 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544197782789 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125337714791 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572897322711 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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