Nowadays, the majority of population in most countries entails young adults compared to old individuals. Average age of the workforce has profoundly affected the productivity and growth of such nations. This essay delves into the advantages as well as the disadvantages of having a large number of young or old people in a country.
It is often perceived that young adults are more productive than their counterpart in the sense that they can devote a large proportion of their time towards their job in respective industries. Furthermore, young pupils are not afraid of taking risks and are open to newer technologies introduced in the industries. According to a radical survey in a renowned aeronautical factory located in North America, 76% of workers aged below 30 consider machines used to fabricate airplane parts are now obsolete and need to be replaced whereas only 36% of workers aged above 40 agreed to the same. Consequently, it can be predicted that young generation is more open to new technologies compared to older people.
Conversely, there may be repercussions of having only young workforce, as they need to be trained first before they can start to contribute in manufacturing products. Old and experienced workers can efficiently handle this role in preparing new workers and can help in making them accustomed with the whereabouts of product manufacturing. For Instance, Reliance industries comprises of 20% population of above 40 individuals who guide and train their younger peers for their respective jobs. However, one cannot ignore the fact that the relatively older workforce cannot work for long hours and are rather inefficient in performing grueling work compared to their counterpart.
To conclude, an efficient workforce must consists of individuals with diversified skill sets and age groups to ensure adequate performance of a developing country. As each section of society brings something unique, therefore, it would not be rational to undermine efforts of any individual in a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... as well as the disadvantages of having a large number of young or old people in a country. It...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...ring. For Instance, Reliance industries comprises of 20% population of above 40 individuals ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.346875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0813815261 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0715407656 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.615384615 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165561473023 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591899073738 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667347311393 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100371510102 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765771975778 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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