Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers.
Why do you think this is happening?
How can companies keep their workers?
An increasing number of people are switching their jobs daily, instead of being loyal to a single company for their entire life. I believe that this is because of no purpose, or job satisfaction in the first place. However, good work-life balance and salary hikes are a few essential expect, which can be used by businesses to retain their staff. This essay will further discuss its cause and solution in detail.
To begin with, the young generation is not committed to their works. This may be due to less job satisfaction, or no purpose. One of the possible reasons for less job satisfaction is less pay or no reward and recognition at the workplace; this results in no motivation to do a job. For example, one of my friends has recently switched his job on a good pay scale, and now he is happily working in the new company. Therefore, a handsome salary works as a motivational coach, which drives the satisfaction or purpose of doing a job.
In contrast, companies can retain their employees for a longer period by adopting some aspects namely, work-life balance and good perks, such as performance incentives and free transportation. undoubtedly, these elements make businesses more employee-friendly and appealing. Before investing a greater amount of time in any company, staff do look for these features, which can create a comfortable and safe working environment for a lifetime. For instance, my current company is providing work from home facilities to its employees. It helped me in balancing my work and personal life, where I can manage the household along with a two years old baby and job simultaneously. As a result, I look for staying longer at my current workplace.
To conclude, purposeful jobs can only hold workers in companies, which gives job satisfaction and an aim to work for. The company should provide a good pay scale and work-life balance to their employees to retain them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
...nce incentives and free transportation. undoubtedly, these elements make businesses more em...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94409937888 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96941185016 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4690591529 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6470588235 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294869823055 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963271568212 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579993511639 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199446238926 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246667470899 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
...nce incentives and free transportation. undoubtedly, these elements make businesses more em...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94409937888 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96941185016 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4690591529 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6470588235 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294869823055 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963271568212 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579993511639 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199446238926 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246667470899 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.