Nowadays, many people choose to watch sports on TV rather than take part in sports themselves. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Today, peoples watch television and internet for sports and do not like playing games in reality. This is negative development because people becoming lazy day by day.
First of all, when peoples stop playing cricket or some games body become lazy. This also making some health problems like diabetics because get too fat. This create problem for hospital staff and they have more lazy peoples to take care. Cricket on television is lot of fun but playing outside with friend and family will make peoples happy and get healthy because of playing and fresh wind. This is main reason for television making people sick.
Secondly, if peoples not playing some sports will miss showing talent. Good player can show by playing good cricket. Play in reality make person to find his own mistake and get better and play better. It also can make people famous ss they play, peoples see the game and find the best player. If player play more, they can play for the country. So watching sports on TV is not same as playing in the real place. For example the cricket game in the stadeum is more fun than eating an watching on TV, feelings are totally different. So, watching games on TV is not positive.
Finally, peoples can enjoy games on TV if they not playing that game. Watch Tennes on TV and play cricket outside is okay. But only sitting and watching and not playing is not good for anybody. Better play games and not become sick.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... in the stadeum is more fun than eating an watching on TV, feelings are totally di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65217391304 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05994466572 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513833992095 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1317703807 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.9473684211 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3157894737 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17369871402 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734393859289 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562335309139 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131379341774 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430305870011 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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