Answer:
I certainly agree that the given statement is most of people suffering not getting enough sleep. This essay will discuss the reason why majority of people have difficulties and the importance of giving positive remedial actions to the society.
To begin with, there are a multiple problems across the world, whereas people not sleep well. Firstly, An employee’s who is working in the private sector facing lot of challenges from the management and A firm give the target to all employee’s to achieve them with over time. Moreover, if do not achieve the target may have difficulties to survive in the company and in the market also for new job search, which makes gives stress. Secondly, People also suffering personal issues such as pay every month bank loan, fees of children education, parent’s health care and so on. Though the above are the significant factor causes of people mentally and physically disturb and not getting sleep well.
However, there are plenty of solutions to take necessary steps about that. People need to make the timetable for routine work life such as get back to home on time from working organization. People can spend time with family and children to reduce the stress and get enough sleep without hesitation. People have to start the exercise to make them busy and increase the health condition, which can reduce the stress and over thinking.
To conclude, The government should have prepared the strict rules and regulation to employer’s, which can people take minimize stress and load. Through the media and television, should give the more awareness about enough sleeping advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Answer: I certainly agree that the given stateme...
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Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ainly agree that the given statement is most of people suffering not getting enough sleep. Thi...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
.... To begin with, there are a multiple problems across the world, whereas people not sl...
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Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd get enough sleep without hesitation. People have to start the exercise to make them...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ness about enough sleeping advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13805970149 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56022089069 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9486384592 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261974733837 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986681639483 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699476957708 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168860261692 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237288314046 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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