More and more compaints about lacking of sleep by people have risen these days. Some of them, would not like to sleep due to work or study. While others suffer from issues like insomnia which could not fall in sleep. All of them could be in danger of serious disease like heart attack or brain issues with higher possiblities. There are serveral ways could help these people who short of sleeping.
To begin with, some people with work or study pressure have to sleep less. For example, students who need to prepare significant tests like Ielts or CFA have to do more preparations. In China, it is not uncommon to see the students reciting english words in campus at five or six o'clock at the dawn. So do the programmers in IT companies. The users may visit the companies' websites or applications anytime of the day, thus ,they have to work all day long to make sure everthing running correctly. On the other hand, some people could not fall in sleep due to mental disorder or anxieties. It is another frightened story we often can see in the movie like 'fight club', which could cause severe mental illness.
Lacking of sleep costs people much nowadays. In that our bodies need to recover from the tiredness of yesterday. Without fully recovered body, one could get problems like heart disease which could kill people or mental problems. In this case, there are several ways of improving this problem. First, people can make full use of time of the day, improve their working or studing efficiency by the means of tomato clock which enhance one's concentration. Second, a healty diet could help people with more naturual slumber, it is advised by doctor that people can drink a cup of milk half an hour before sleep. Morevoer, going to the gym to excercise is an important way for us improve our body condtion and sleep well.
In all, people should take more time to sleep even if there are obstacles in front of us. In that without a healty body, we could not live in a good life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...not like to sleep due to work or study. While others suffer from issues like insomnia...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... english words in campus at five or six oclock at the dawn. So do the programmers in I...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or applications anytime of the day, thus ,they have to work all day long to make s...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...the means of tomato clock which enhance ones concentration. Second, a healty diet co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62429378531 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3020241812 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556497175141 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3307244237 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9523809524 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253775833094 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769244317249 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730116833981 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152845065667 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044828279203 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.