In today's modern world the trend of raising children is changing drastically. Some people think that it is essential to provide their kids with great comfort and luxurious lifestyle which includes junk food as well. However, most of the parents are helpless as they are working and are not able to offer home food to their offsprings.
Although, every parent on this planet aspire the best for their child and make efforts to do so. But not all them are successful in it as there are multiple reasons for their failures. Perhaps, the primary factor as I have aforestated, is that in modern era the standard of living has risen in contrast to bygone. Nowadays, people have plenty of money which they lavishly spend on their children's demand irrespective of its consequences. I can reminisce of my neighbor, whose son became obese due to the fact that he was pampered with a lot of junk food.
Conversely, there is another section of the society who wish to feed their kids with home made food, but are incapable of doing it. The root cause is that the basic cost of living has inflated to a great extent. Hence, they are engaged in jobs most of the time to earn a decent amount of money so that they can fulfill the necessary requirements of a family. Therefore, kids of such families are compelled to survive on junk food as they are easily available everywhere.
Conspicuously, I would like to suggest that though there could be plenty of excuses to allow children to grab junk food but I firmly believe that "where there is a will there is a way". I strongly endorse my point that young generation should be taught about the pros and cons of having unhealthy food. In addition, if both the parents are working then they can either hire a cook or they can prepare a meal beforehand and preserve it in refrigerator so that a child can heat it and have it whenever he is famished.
All in all, it is our responsibility to take care of the health of our children and it might be intricate for some but it is definitely doable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... food. Conversely, there is another section of the society who wish to feed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59836065574 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60548745956 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8259682353 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816911198538 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248466399637 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244176260759 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466142737005 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318059741594 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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