Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In this modern complex and competitive world having children at early-stage of marriage means extra financial burden, perhaps due to this, an increasing number couples in these days prefer to have children later in their life. Despite the fact that maternity at older age can render some health complications, I believe the advantages in the form of maturity to handle responsibilities far outweigh the disadvantages.
The predominant reason why most couples defer pregnancy is financial insecurity. It is a well-known fact that people in this intensively competitive world struggle to secure a regular job or fixed income, so they focus on their careers and earnings without thinking about a child, which will perhaps aids to their financial worries. Therefore, until they do not become capable of providing their children with quality education, medical facilities and best possible lifestyle they tend to avoid it. However, the decision of attaining parenthood in later years of life can have own merits and demerits.
On the one hand, parents achieve the maturity with age to take care of all the responsibilities of a child including monetary issues. This is because, their age and experience not only make them capable of taking complex decisions of young children's life but also stem some behavioral changes such as patience, and caring attitude that are imperative for being responsible parents. Therefore, it seems beneficial for both children as well as for families.
On the other hand, some health complications likely to occur while conceiving or giving birth to a child in older age. For instance, scientific research has proven that 40 percent of couples, who are above the age of 38, have been facing difficulties in having babies. Apparently, this is due to the decaying of human reproduction system and infertility with age. Thus, it might have adverse impacts on societies and families.
Taking into consideration above mentioned arguments, I would like to conclude that being parents at later years of life is largely a positive decision as it enables individuals to feel financially and psychologically secure inspite of some fertility issues which can easily be cured with available advanced medical technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35028248588 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97364121132 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7515538632 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.285714286 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208448996278 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639174826948 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517338612334 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109224932847 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636390599188 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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