Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs.
What problem does this cause?
What are some possible solutions?
Recently many people have to contest with the youth for the same work. The main problem this cause is unemployment and the most viable solution is a public awareness educating people about competing for same jobs with young people.
The principal problem associated with trying to compete with adolescents for the same type of work is unemployemnt. This is because, lots of people have interest in a particular type of job which they do not get, and in the long run they end up competing with young adult for the same job. As a result of this, they end up not being employed by employers which leaves them jobless. For example, a recent government survey found that 80% of people in society are unemployed because they want to be Chartatered Accountants in banks.
To tackle this problem, the government must launch a public campaign in the media and in schools to educate people about the dangers of unemployment and not starting a business after graduating from school. Many people are not able to start up a company because they are scared of failure and what other entrepreneurs have gone through. An awareness campaign could shed more light on this situation by creating start up business modules and educating people on how to start up a business after school. For example, a similar initiative by the Canadian government resulted in a 40% decrease in unemployemnt rate in 2017.
In conclusion, unemployment is a major issue because people tend to have a specific type of job they are interested, However it can be addressed by education through public campaign.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93258426966 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74860950029 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524344569288 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0856233213 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33115200188 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13278560219 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863477928212 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205732268717 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109601979377 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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