Gone are the days when people had to stand to queue for the service but in present secnario individuals want to do service done immedatily through the advancement of teachnology.there are pelthora if advantage and disadvantage of this phenomona which i would discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with,there are two key factors which are responsible for this attitudes of ctizen such as,existence of internet and their lifestyle is busy .First of all,in these days ,internet is developing day by day , which is very baneficial for everyone because,there are many sides are present on internet due to this,it is better way to save their time because people have no need to go anywhere they can buy anything from internet such as,paying bills and online shopping.However,everyones life is confortable withe the help of internet because people do online jobs through internet for instance,this thing is better for women who have small children and they can takecare of their children and also can do work at home.
On the other hand,each coin has two sides,similarly,this trend has also drawbacks.First and formost is that,individual have become overdependent on internet which is bad for them because sometimes internet provides wrong informatiom about things.Last but not least, world wide web not only has revolatonized their life but also made people less patient.
To sum up,from above all mentioned discussion it can be conclude that,no doubt there are pelthora merits but using internet has demerits which cannot be neglected them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, similarly, so, for instance, no doubt, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33196721311 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37457480315 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.806400286 49.4020404114 421% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.25 106.682146367 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 20.7667163134 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.25 7.06120827912 428% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914883480182 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587547472192 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593172630549 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587547472192 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593172630549 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 13.0946893788 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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