In our world today, many people need things to be done instantly for them. This is because they believe that the era of technology has made it possible, and It is a positive development, in my opinion, so I will discuss further in the body paragraphs.
The main reason why individuals want things to be done immediately is because the invention of technology has made it a possibility. In other words, the invention of the internet helps companies carry out swift services such as delivery. Similarly, the mobile phone is an invention that has made it possible to get various informations across to second parties fast. Clearly, more and more people prefer things to be done instantly given that technology has made that instant service a reality.
On the other hand, having things done instantly even if it is impromptu is a good development, and I will explain them ahead. Firstly, when you call your customer care, they receive your information, and act on it very fast. This solves the issue of going to your service provider physically. With the internet, secondly, students can do their assignments at home which was given to them in school. So, this has sorted out the issue of having to go to class to receive these assignments. Therefore, it is indeed a positive development if tasks can be done instantly.
To conclude, individual people love to achieve a task or service instantly, and this is because they know that technology has made it achievable, so to this end, I can comfortably say that I believe its development is a positive one.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84269662921 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83178762752 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6920368356 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332613544139 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104678297977 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832603433366 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180944236166 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490340250731 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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