In our world today, everyone uses gas and oil in different ways, and it has been proven to be very important in the society. There is an increase in demand for gas and oil, and so finding new sources in rural and untouched areas is a necessity. In this essay I will discuss how finding new sources of oil and gas causes environmental pollution such as oil spillage, and how it can grow the economy of the country where it is discovered.
To begin, when oil and gas is discovered in a remote and untouched area, it will cause environmental pollution such as oil spillage. For instance, after oil and gas was discovered in Bayelsa State, the environment where the source was located became very polluted because of oil spillage. Similarly, in Oguta, there was environmental pollution after oil and gas was located in the area. Clearly, if oil and gas is discovered in rural and untouched areas, then it will cause environmental issues such as oil spillage.
To continue, the economy of a country will grow given that new sources of oil and gas have been found. The reason is that we need oil and gas globally, so any country with abundance of these resources can become marketers. For example, over time, Nigeria's economy has gained from these resources, and it is a fact shown in our annual budgets. Although our leaders frustrate this success, it can be ascertained. Therefore, the economy of a country will grow as long as new sources of oil and gas are found.
To conclude, in this essay I have discussed how finding new sources of oil and gas causes environmental pollution such as oil spillage, and how it can grow the economy of the country where it is discovered. As per my belief, the advantages of finding new sources of oil and gas outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69968051118 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75514234435 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.399361022364 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2113974616 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389388512646 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172084995895 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126289909764 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273097150361 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817047918834 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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