nowadays newspaper publish information about private lives of individuals. Some people think the government should maintain control over the information that gets published, while other disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Presently, private affairs of public figures are often published by media house and protecting personal lives from such publication is a heated topic. Therefore, some people believe that the authority should provide certain policies to control this phenomenon, however, others have conflicting views. In my view point, governments being a controlling body should guarantee fundamental right of privacy to every citizen regardless of their status in society.
Oh the one hand, there are some people who think that press has no right to encroach the private space of people even if they are celebrities and public figures. Paparazzi has been a cause of distress and extreme consequences in certain cases. Their hot pursuit of people, in order to extract details about their private information has ruined many lives. As a result, people attribute towards family disputes and legal separation and even bereavement by these investigative journalists. This can be illustrated by the death of princess Diana in a car mishap that was outcome of a press photographer chasing her and her friend.
On the other hand, some people defend the right of reports and citizens to know, and private lives of individual specially celebrated personalities and politicians. These key figures through their actions, influence their followers, critics other common people profoundly, positively or negatively. Hence, the efforts to bring out information about how noted famous celebrity behave and deal with situation publicly and privately can inspire or caution general public. For instance, a release of vital information of convict on the run can help the police to catch them.
To conclude, I personally feel that despite the fact that freedom should be rendered to press to peek into private lives, certain limit should be defined and caution must exercised on what can be brought forth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 360, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...o bring out information about how noted famous celebrity behave and deal with situation publicly...
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Line 9, column 454, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ly and privately can inspire or caution general public. For instance, a release of vital infor...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39322033898 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79433086366 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640677966102 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7135850905 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213805643798 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691733253002 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042676292251 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122290641583 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471775944447 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.