In today's era, parents have plethora of demands from their children to have a successful life. In my opinion, this is a negative aspect as it can expose children to depression. This essay will discuss the reason of parent's pressurizing their children and it's detrimental effects.
Most parents believe that a required amount of pressure can help their children achieve personal growth and future contentment. A moderate control can truly provide an encouragement for children to flourish their credence and be focused throughout their school years, which in succession will motivate them. For example, doing studies and extracurricular activities with strict deadlines will develop children's understanding to survive in the demanding work environment when they are adults, which will consequently make them effective and efficient employees. Moreover, according to business insider magazine, over 65% of employers choose their member of workforce on their ability to perform under strain. Hence, putting children under requisite burden will help them to develop into an excellent individual with good surviving skills.
Although every parent wants best for their kids, they often end up stressing their children who can turn up to become stubborn and performing badly in school. Children who are constantly under extreme pressure by family, become depressed, under confident and have an increased anxiety, while culminating a pessimistic point of view. A study conducted by psychology department at University of Southern California, observed 50 children from ages 5 to 15 with different upbringing, for 3 years, and reported that 90% of children with extreme pressure to perform well were among the bottom 5% of their class and dropped out of sports and drama due to the fear of failure. Clearly, undue pressure on kids can lead to children becoming miserable and manifest disorders.
In conclusion, minimalist pressure on children proves to be beneficial, whereas, extra stress is detrimental for children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'understanding surviving'.
Suggestion: understanding surviving
...strict deadlines will develop childrens understanding to survive in the demanding work environment when ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55194805195 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89477140157 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4536728412 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.538461538 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302180123276 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116710574299 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621912219544 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193804930588 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678039595896 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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