Nowadays, people are get married and have their children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own example based in your experience.
Currently, individuals enter marriage life and consequently have their child when they past the age of more than 30. In my perspective, this is a positive progress to one's preference in terms of changing his personal status. This is due to the reasons such as stability and being mature enough for the right legal age.
To begin with, a person continually working unceasingly might be perceived as having a stable job. Majority of people these days, especially when they have reached the age of 25 are seriously seeking for a long-term career. As a result, one may find himself satisfied with his capacity to earn and save money for the future. To illustrate, numerous individuals tend to spend their much treasured savings to some significant investments that include a car or even a house. During these times, financial stability could definitely be achieved. Hence, other aspects to a person's life such as having his own family could be the next chapter fir him to look ahead and could eventually support their needs.
Furthermore, people exceeding 30 years old could be deemed to develop their psychological well-being. They may be observed to exhibit willingness to handle much greater duties and responsibilities in relation to people around them. At this legal and matured age, one could easily manage his problems and solve them in a practical way. For example, when an individual has been reprimanded by his superior, usually he would respond appropriately. He has the capacity to do it owing to his level of maturity at this stage. Therefore, he could now open his doors to getting married as this experience also requires emotional and mental preparedness.
To sum up, embracing the holy sacrament of marriage in one's life at the right age and time is basically the society's standard. This is due to reasons such as stability of resources and upon reaching the maturation age. It is for a fact that marrying someone is a critical decision, thus, people should be certain enough based on the aforementioned factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'positive progress'.
Suggestion: positive progress
...ore than 30. In my perspective, this is a positive progress to ones preference in terms of changing...
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Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...pective, this is a positive progress to ones preference in terms of changing his per...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... be achieved. Hence, other aspects to a persons life such as having his own family coul...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a practical way" with adverb for "practical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sily manage his problems and solve them in a practical way. For example, when an individual has be...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02071005917 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88072868181 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60650887574 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8452253433 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2777777778 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14330180545 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04441242706 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389491782729 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928308096497 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00936465074994 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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