Nowadays people are influenced by fashion, in particular when choosing their clothes and hairstyle. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
Clothing has been a great obsession for mankind from the day on which he set foot on this planet. These days, fashion has a great impact on the way people dress up or do their hair. I personally find this a negative development due to several reasons which will be discussed in the following.
To begin with, being a fashion icon sets one back in the path toward achieving goals. Firstly, fashion clothes are usually made out of expensive materials such as cashmere or suede, resulting in a hefty price tag on them. Thus, it will cost a fortune does one want to be up to date with the fashion. Secondly, following fashion will take a lot of time from an individual inasmuch as not only is he forced to follow the magazines and latest shows, but he has to take some time to shop and find the right size of clothes. Consequently, money and time, the most valuable assets in modern age, are wasted, which could be simply invested to achieve another goal like buying a better car. Research has shown that people interested in fashion spend 20 percent of their income and 40 hours a month to follow brans and buy clothes.
Moreover, following fashion can be harmful for the body and health. As said before, it takes time and money to be fashionable. Therefore, one will be forced to work harder as well as cutting back from other expenses such as going to the gym in order to provide the money needed for buying clothes. As a result, he eventually will quit healthy lifestyle, which will lead to diseases in the long-term.
Granted what was aid, it must be taken into account that sometimes people are forced to dress up. In everyone’s life there are some rite of passages in which people wish to be as handsome and good-looking as possible, and as it happens fashionable clothes like tuxedos make people look awesome.
To sum up, even though looking good matters, being up to the fashion is a negative development. This will cost one a lot of time and money and can be harmful for his body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...fore, one will be forced to work harder as well as cutting back from other expense...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'rites'?
Suggestion: rites
... In everyone's life there are some rite of passages in which people wish to be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57222222222 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48317797177 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1436001403 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8235294118 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.70588235294 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141759330932 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052010609101 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036624034251 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945275739576 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493494471475 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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