Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Provide relevant examples from you own experience.
It is true that online music and movies are free and increasingly popular among people. Although there are some drawbacks on listening to music or watching movies online, I would argue that there are far more benefits.
The main drawback of the trend towards online free music or movies is people will never get the actual effect as they get in theatres. experience of a movie with intense special effects and graphics will be missed when people watch it on a mobile, computer or tv. Similarly, detailing in music will not be noticeable when you listen to them in your speakers or headphones as they are composed for high-end speakers to give the best experience. For example, watching the Avatar 3D movie on your television will be less appealing and interesting than watching it in theatres. Normal televisions or sound system do not have the necessary capability to properly present the actual effects and getting an advanced tv or speakers to get best out of it are too expensive.
Despite the negatives mentioned above, I believe that online free music and movies are a progressive development for various reasons. Firstly, they allow people to watch a film or listen to music in a flexible way, meaning they watch or listen to them whenever and wherever they want. Secondly, the cost of watching a movie in a theatre for a family is very expensive, so people prefer watching it in online rather than spending money on tickets and transport. Finally, online movies or music overcomes the geographical barriers, meaning we can watch the movies and listen to music which never got released in your locality. For example, my cousin who is in the US watches all the movies in online which would have been impossible if watching movies only in theatres was an option.
In Conclusion, while I recognize the possible disadvantages of online free films and music, I consider it to be a positive development overall.
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- Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?Provide relevant examples from you own experience. 56
- Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?Provide relevant examples from you own experience. 73
- Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?Provide relevant examples from you own experience. 56
- Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?Provide relevant examples from you own experience. 56
- Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?Provide relevant examples from you own experience. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... actual effect as they get in theatres. experience of a movie with intense special effects...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a flexible way" with adverb for "flexible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ople to watch a film or listen to music in a flexible way, meaning they watch or listen to them w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90797546012 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68231495251 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509202453988 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.2281749225 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14846539874 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664060030582 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492130404741 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115514222865 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400522310203 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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