We have been living a life of self-created cages in big cities, to which we are bounded deep down. Its brightness is so strong that we have forgotten the beauty of life outside our cage. Although small towns are missing these so-called high standard life, they have their own simplicity and serenity. In this essay, I will mention some key points regarding the imbalance it is creating in our society, and how the government can help us here.
Generally, all the big cities are provided with all the top-notch facilities which make people from the small town migrate in here. As you can see, some people are moving to big towns just by seeing its outward shine and then finally end up living a below poverty line life. Though a few of them are migrating in the hunt of new opportunities, as it is not available in their small town. People are focusing more into their studies nowadays, which is a good initiative among people in small towns, but at the same time, it is making them vacant their places where they have been living for a long time. Now you can see that we have the farming land but farmers are not ploughing on it, as they don’t get sufficient help from the government in that entire process. There is even no other source of income which is ultimately forcing them to migrate for some other better opportunities. This has a big disadvantage though, big cities are becoming overcrowded and this is leading to high crime rates, poverty and bizarre situations.
Even people in big cities are so much busy in their rat race that they have forgotten the beauty of nature. They are not even aware of how long they have not breathed a fresh air. Though in the small town people live life at a slow pace and for not so big goals, they are at least having fun and enjoying their life with no stress and worries. This is all happening because of the low standard of living in small towns and very fewer growth opportunities in their space.
In conclusion, I would say the government should take some initiatives to maintain a balance between big and small cities so that people need to migrate in hunt of jobs and education to other towns. Even the government can make small towns good from a tourism perspective so that it can open some money making opportunities for small town people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, regarding, so, then, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58837772397 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44444154269 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486682808717 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0366979427 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.470588235 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174403269729 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624352544134 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453440288418 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112943440365 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406269690368 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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