With the inception of the technological era, various digital platforms of communication have also come into the picture. Nowadays, people find these ways of communication much more convenient and time-saving than meeting someone in person. Hence, the significance of social media platforms and internet chat groups cannot be discarded.
However, there is still a part of our society that prefers to confront each other personally rather than have a conversation through the internet.
Nowadays, almost everyone has a mobile phone and all it takes for them is just a few seconds to send another person a text message. However, social media platforms such as Facebook, WhatsApp, and MySpace provide users many more activities to do. People, especially teenagers, use these websites and applications a lot and sometimes come into contact with new people whom they haven’t even met personally. Therefore, virtual friendship with unknown people exposes them to multiple digital frauds such as theft of identity, monitory frauds, etc.
Apart from this, the extensive use of social media also causes many physiological problems for users. For instance, research conducted by ABC university states that people who use social media at least six hours a day are more depressed than the lot, who don’t use these platforms at all. This study further showed that heavy users of social media lacked confidence while confronting people in public.
On the other hand, the study also showed that people who were more involved in outings and used the internet only when it was necessary, they were more confident. Additionally, there chances to lead a successful life were much more.
In essence, the importance of social media platforms cannot be denied, however, people should ensure to take some safety measures while using these websites and applications, so that they don’t create any adverse effects on their lives. In my opinion, social media companies should put a limitation on the usage of their websites or application in a day and also send out advisories regarding that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 548, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...theft of identity, monitory frauds, etc. Apart from this, the extensive use of so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, at least, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34545454545 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77219567681 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0362441426 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158583346624 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550551487404 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340540901042 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824274897694 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016801064171 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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