Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good while others think that face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Friendship via social networking sites is becoming increasingly popular among people. Some people argued that It’s a good and convenient way to make new friends, while others have a different viewpoint, and want people to personally meet with a stranger for friendship. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why face-2-face interaction is compulsory for friendship.
To begin with, advocates of having online friendships argued that these networking sites build relationships among people despite location. Therefore, such connections on social websites like LinkedIn enable people to find jobs with the help of their friends. It is often claimed, for example, that reference-based hiring has increased by over 40% in the MEA region because it is the fast, cheap and reliable hiring process. It is also argued that friendships over social networks would help people to learn about diversified languages without physically visiting the country. For an instant, a person living in an Asian country could get help via Skype to improve his speaking section to pass the IELTS exam from a native English friend without visiting him.
On the other hand, despite the above-mentioned positives. People give equal convincing reasons for a face-2-face catch-up. Firstly, having an interaction with a stranger over the internet, don’t provide the entire picture of the person’s characteristics. Therefore, the in-person meeting is compulsory to know more about his/her behavior to move the matter forward. Finally, the online friendship could be dangerous as no one knows the people speaking on the other side is involved in criminal activities, hence personal interaction would figure out their background information which helps them to build a long-term friendship.
In conclusion, I am of the view that although online friends help a lot to secure a job and pass the exam, I think personal interact is also necessary to check the background and know the real character of the person to build a long-term relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01391801069 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587692307692 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.762232769 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.285714286 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242679852125 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814019068564 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06892367877 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149433053906 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781057982197 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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