Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which job should be highly paid?
These days, a huge quantum of wealth is earned by movie stars, sportspersons and pop musicians. Irrespective of the social strata, people follow them, and get motivated, because they consider them as their idol and in many instances follow their foot-steps.
I completely agree that this is the best way to value people who have a greater influence on everybody's life.
Firstly, some icons related to the entertainment industry have a high influence on people's lives, as they amuse people and in today's world entertainment is mandatory considering everybody has a hectic daily schedule due to personal and professional commitments. Those who follow sports more compared to watching movies or attending to any musical event are bigger followers of sportspersons. So, people persuading different types of interests follow accordingly. This engagement is mandatory to keep them happy, for which they spend money, that indirectly reaches their favourite celebrities.
Another point to consider is that these celebrities help in boosting the sales of different organisations. For example, companies pay a hefty amount of money to these categories of celebrities to endorse their products. Since the public follows their respective idols and they buy the products which are endorsed by their favourite celebrity. This helps in increasing companies sales and improves the economy.
In conclusion, certain movie persona, musicians, sports stars should be highly paid as they help in boosting the economy because of their fan followers apart from entertaining people which is their primary objective. Their earning is justifiable as they serve society and also entertain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, if, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98475944212 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9804699053 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961242539573 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332723742274 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359734996082 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531605581272 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257729509053 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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