Nowadays, some parents pressure their children to be successful. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
These days, parents pay more attention to their children in order to make them successful and sometimes also force them to perform better. In my opinion, I believe this trend favourable to youngsters as they could achieve a remarkable position in their life.
The major reason behind this is the positive intention of guardians for their children to have a well-settled life. At first, juveniles would find this pressure of being succeeded annoying, however, later on, it will become their habit, and they would always try to do their best in their studies and job place as well. As a result of this, they could gain a respectable status in society and it leads to a better living standard. Moreover, youngsters could get a high-pay job or can excel in their own business which means they could earn more and have the ability to fulfill their needs in a relaxing way.
This trend is common amongst the new generation of educated parents because they could guide their offsprings in the right direction in order to achieve specific goals. Teenagers might not attain that maturity level with which they could able to take important decisions of their lives. Thus, they to depend upon their fathers and mothers to choose a right path for them. By doing so, the parent-child relationship becomes stronger which is beneficial for humanity to form a prosperous society.
In conclusion, it is acceptable that parents should put some pressure on their children so that they could lead a comfortable and meaningful life. It would aid to develop a wonderful community where all have high standards of thinking and living.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-04 | ishpinder45 | 73 | view |
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product( such as cellphone) or service (e,g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.Do you think people can be happy without much money?What other factors contribute towards happiness? 61
- Many employers are employing people with good skills as well as good qualifications. Do you agree or disgree that good social skills are as important as good qualifications to succed in job? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 590, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a relaxing way" with adverb for "relaxing"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...have the ability to fulfill their needs in a relaxing way. This trend is common amongst the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99264705882 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59740760682 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1045272164 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291634381553 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109778376336 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717310656912 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17661974484 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402802660135 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.