Nowadays students are allowed to use mobile phones during the lessons under the control of their teachers. Write an essay of 250 words to expression your opinion.
Whether students are authorized to use mobile phones while the lessons are taking place under the control of their teachers sparks a heated debate . In my view, i totally hold onto the matter for the following reasons . Firstly , it supports students to enlarge their knowledge because as can be seen , there are a lot of things which we probaly can’t know exactly; in detail is astronomy,geological .....It only takes us a few minutes to search the accurate information .Secondly , society is developing and progressing rapidly so is the education .The use of electrical devices in teaching is esential and extremely necessary ; and the phone is a useful tool to satisfy that need. I want to assert that the phones is not a cause of harm , it is merely a connecting device that aids students to connect with there teacher and understands the lessons better . Last but not least , the use of teachnology in learning , especially mobiles phone, can make students feel the class time is more lively and engaging that help them to improve their thinking ability and at the same time students can remember information easily through the colourful pictures . In conclusion , i hope the use of smartphones in class is more popular to help the education expand more!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85531583265 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.558559774 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.333333333 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23214971662 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113707859293 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104545650642 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23214971662 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.