Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Media are becoming very compelling and yet too transparent now days this has some pros and cons on it.
There are many kind of media but TV is popular amongst in our society. News channel are now very active and its their duty to show people true face of over society.
Some news channel are doing their job properly by providing open news about over society and show true faces of the culprits in over society. There are several examples like Panama Leaks news which is grave danger for the corrupt politician and businessmen. Its shows the true faces of people who are in power and bring them to justice.
Although, There are many corrupt anchor or TV icons who took advantages of media power. There were several name who blackmail simple citizen and took ransom from them to not show their recording to media channels. Those kind of media person are true culprits of our society as they are responsible to show true colors of society and people have faith on them as they are sincere towards the people.
In my Opinion, These TV channels are very powerful, So powerful that it can bring justice in our country. but there are some bad fishes in this profession who take bribe for not showing truth to the people. Those person should be removed from this powerful jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...as some pros and cons on it. There are many kind of media but TV is popular amongst in o...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...y. News channel are now very active and its their duty to show people true face of ...
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Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun name seems to be countable; consider using: 'several names'.
Suggestion: several names
...k advantages of media power. There were several name who blackmail simple citizen and took r...
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Line 6, column 215, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'Those kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; Those kinds
...show their recording to media channels. Those kind of media person are true culprits of ou...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...at it can bring justice in our country. but there are some bad fishes in this profe...
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Line 8, column 208, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'Those people', 'Those persons'?
Suggestion: This person; Those people; Those persons
...be for not showing truth to the people. Those person should be removed from this powerful jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64317180617 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15607153236 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537444933921 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9025286093 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117075422089 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481359056195 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374204742861 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750874377111 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388496189733 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.