Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. why do you think this is happening. what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced.
certainly, lifestyle of masses has been changed in comparison to past days and can be clearly seen that it results in the production of great amount of garbage around the cities and villages.there are multifarious resons behind this situation which may creat various problems but can be curbed by authorities by taking effective measures. To commence with, increasing rate of waste in countries is become a matter of grave concern which holds many reasons . The predominant one is the overuse of plastic bags as these are used to carry things from one place to another. these bags are not degradable and owing to lack of this quality , number of polethenes can be commonly found in the dump which further cause diseases and problems for animals as well. this above mentioned situation is merely occurring as masses do not prefer to reuse their old belongings ; they always like to buy new ones instead of recycling products. However, to decrease the quantity of garbage, government can implement new rules regarding the limited use of polethenes and also can suggest masses to use bags made with clothes for carrying therir household things such as , vegetables and fruits etcetera . another possible solution can be from the side of producers by changing their packaging techniques as tgey can use less number of paper or other material which is not biodegradable. consequently, less waste is likely to be there which ultimately can reduce the rate of soil pollution. it is also proved by a survey held ar India that advanced methid of packing seemed more productive in the generation of waste . To summarise, from above mentioned explanation it is vivid that although control on garbage production is must , yet this is not possible with the intervention of government only , there should be a contribution of each and every individual to curb this issue
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04234527687 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81354030899 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602605863192 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5522635471 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.8 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126055691485 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463445325529 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240540368274 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126055691485 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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