Now-a-days, demand for migrant workers is increasing rapidly. Some people think it's beneficial for children and families to settle abroad while other argue that it's difficult for children. I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for latter view.
Going abroad has many benefits attached to the youth. Firstly, education is the main factor which force people to think about the same. It is beneficial to shift to developed country. Better educational facilities and offers divert mind of children. For example, Finland is a country having better education and high knowledge. Secondly, various amenities like better infrastructure, transportation and better job opportunities are main motive of every children. For example, Canada has become best destination for providing better job after studies and best convenience facilities.
On the other hand, for many reasons, I believe it's difficult for children and family members to settle abroad. Adopting the changes like environment and weather takes time. Learning new language and accepting changes create barrier. Finding food as per the taste is tough in new location, covering loneliness and accepting new culture takes lot of time. Lot of struggle and efforts are faced by people to reach the path.
To recapitulate, I believe the decision of family members whether they move or not, however, before doing so should be made by their children. The child should also be agree and prepared for the change. Decision should be taken in respect for the future of youth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'become the best'.
Suggestion: become the best
...every children. For example, Canada has become best destination for providing better job af...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3306122449 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7086914884 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608163265306 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5382274098 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5555555556 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6111111111 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377689706548 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958465480201 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106889240702 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215770775587 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12372167288 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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