Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many people believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Recently there are proliferating of social issues which involve juveniles. The majority considers that since parents busy with their job and spend lesser time with their child result in such problems. I completely agree with since a child’s mind is like a blackboard and it is important one should monitor their conduct from the beginning.
Firstly, life was not that stressful like it is now and earlier one member of the family always used to look after a child at home. Since now both parents are working these days to give the best life to their child but due to their busy schedule which is why unable to give attention to their child’s upbringing. Moreover, many times the juvenile lures in an unwanted circumstance which is taking drugs, alcohol. For example, according to The Mumbai Police Department, they say on average 75% of teenagers have bad habits because no one is there to keep an eye on their mischiefs. Hence, such behaviour results in an adverse effect on them.
Secondly, since parents spend less time with them because of which they fulfil their demands without asking any questions. Perhaps, the adolescent will never know the value of money because the dreams are taken care of by their parents without teaching the values. For instance, according to The Ryan international schools, they say many students bring expensive mobile to the school just for fun without knowing how conducive it is. Therefore, such conducts create peer pressure and others also demand to their parent's.
To conclude, the parents should give time to see how their kid is growing so that they will not get into any addition like drugs. Additional they should also teach the importance of money and the things they have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'considers'.
Suggestion: considers
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd others also demand to their parents. To conclude, the parents should give tim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95532646048 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44281318122 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0340683469 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23185022703 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783798994017 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540815760263 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136661941565 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446342170184 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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