Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past. What are the reasons for it? Is this a positive development or a negative development?
There is no doubt that, culture and traditions play vital role in overall development of adolescents. I believe having less knowledge of culture and traditions than in the past is positive development. In this essay, I will give reasons for it and explain my support to the positive side.
To begin with, one of the primary reason for less knowledge of heritage is media. In other words, influence of media has a great impact on youngsters’ life as they try to mimic foreign culture. For instance, because of television and other media, foreign people learn about yoga from India which can help them to stay healthy. I believe, this is a positive development because people learn about new culture and traditions which can increase knowledge of individuals. As a result of this, people learn to give respect to the other culture.
Additionally, education system also play crucial role for the less knowledge of customs. The reason for this is that, schools and universities focus on academic and career oriented subjects so that students can get better professional job. In my view, this is practical approach because in order to get lucrative job, awareness of practical subjects is necessary. For example, a person who is tech-savvy and has more understanding of technology might get well-paid job rather that a person who has more knowledge about ethics.
In conclusion, even if communication technology and education system play important role in less understanding of customs, I opine that this is a positive development as this help young people to value other culture and focus on practical subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in my view, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94484616176 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0774481461 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360421482387 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12784967393 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906319193702 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232929367007 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909502992808 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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