In the current modern world, young people always feel following the customs is old school. There are lot of reasons for them. But the most important ones are parents and movies. The possible solutions are more awareness by the parents and movie makers should stop the demonizing the traditions.
To commence with, parents are the first people child will look into for the manners or customs to follow. If the parents are not following them, child will never follow the same. So it is the duty of the parents to explain their children about who are our ancestors, what are the different rituals and how to practice them. If the parents don't teach them to their child, this information will not pass on to the next generation. For example, one my relatives they don't following the traditions and obviously they didn't teach the same to their children. Now the children also not following traditions.
Furthermore, younger people follow the movie stars like gods. in the latest movies, movie makers always portrait the traditions in the bad light. These acts will motivate our younger audience to not follow centuries old customs. These so called creative directors create comedy scenes on the traditions and accepting the same as a society is the tragedy of our generation. For example, take PK movie which portraits our traditions very bad way. If these movie makers don't like the traditions it is up to them. Who gave the right to them to frame these bad jokes on our traditions. Government authorities should reject these kind of films from distribution and should support good films like Bahubali. Bahubali effectively sends a good message across the country about our traditions and culture.
In a nutshell, it the job of the parents and movie makers to improve the situation. Parents should follow and teach the same to their children about our heritage. Movie makers should make movies which convey message to follow the traditions and how to preserve our culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97583081571 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49639712639 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474320241692 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0073017311 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8636363636 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0454545455 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95454545455 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107964026051 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374220253497 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334688378505 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698751656994 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132994293074 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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