The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society?
How can this problem be resolved?
It is a bitter truth that lots of people are suffering from the serious diseases like high blood pressure, obesity due to overweight. There are myriad reasons behind this deplorable condition. I will discuss some of them in the following paragraph and try to give some solution as well.
First of all, lack of physical activity in daily routine is a primary reason for the overweight issue. Technology and Automobile revolution makes people's life effortless. For example, Since the invention of the motorbike or the car, people are using it to travel very small distance in place of cover the distant by walking. Additionally, unbalanced diet also increases the weight dramatically. From the University research, It has been proven that too much consumption of junk food increases the weight significantly because it is too heavy for the digestive system. By this way, People are getting overweight.
Besides, regular physical exercise can reduce the possibility of getting overweight related issues. For example, Daily thirty minutes walk may put you in pink-full health for decades and helps to control the weight of the body. Moreover, balanced and healthy diet can control the weight. For example, Taking the fruits or ample vegetable in the diet and avoid fast food like Pizza, Burger as much as possible.
To sum up, Overweight is a serious problem but It can be possible to avoid by doing exercise regularly and taking healthy food. Overweighting is a disease which can happen because of human errors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14574898785 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73947601021 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2358250435 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278785793435 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869291190851 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729724675147 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159735562682 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502333799134 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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