It is true that, in this contemporary era, food shortage are being escalated day by day in all over the world. A number of masses contemplate that food can be produced by technologies or fertilizer and so on. Furthermore, according to my perspective, it is a exemplary way for producing food.
To commence with, our world population is being increased at a unprecedented rate due to this only people are having to face shortage of food. However, if we would produce more crops by genetically method so it saves our time, apart from it, we would easily grow more than one crop at a same time. It doesn't matter we are growing seasonal crops or unseasonal. For example, to exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that, right now we have big halls and all the temperature are controlled by scientists. Additionally, they can increase or decrease temperature according to crop capacity.
Some more reasons could be, if we would put fertilizers, pesticides, in our crops so it would protect from incects after that profit of farmers can also be raised entirely. Moreover, we would keep adequate food in our buffer stock according to our public. Last but not least, this type of things can allow natural things to grow in a good way without harming because we would get more output in less input so we would not need to face any problem in our future.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly population is being raised day by day and we do not have sufficient food for feeding our people so if we will use these methods then we can fulfill all needs of our public. In addition, it saves times, increase profit of farmers, fulfilling all food need of public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ore, according to my perspective, it is a exemplary way for producing food. To...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... world population is being increased at a unprecedented rate due to this only peo...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...w more than one crop at a same time. It doesnt matter we are growing seasonal crops or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, for example, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69965870307 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76858923869 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1733552314 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107894703786 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496474150096 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422925208974 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803744726129 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359547669468 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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