The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
The control on rise in criminal activities require dire attention. It is thought by a significant number of individuals that educating guardian superior parenting is the alone way to improve such conditions. I completely agree and the reasons will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, Children learn most of the things from their parents therefore, guiding right things to the parent can also prevent child to do illegal act. Since the birth the new offspring stay with his family and learn different behaviors and attitude to follow. For instance, the Muslim kids learn to go mosque and do prayers from his father. Hence, I believe that guiding parents the right path can be effective way to minimize crimes in the society.
Secondly, teaching parents parenting skills will incorporate in their minds to follow rules and regulations and also the culture of good habits will be developed in the home environment, which ultimately will benefit the whole family. For instance, we have often observed the children ambition to join army comes from their parents or other family members, thus educating guardian better skills can prevent children to perform wrong doings.
In conclusion, parent involvements in the upbringing of pupils are most valuable and essential for the children as well as for their family environment therefore, I completely agree that educating parenting talents will make improvements in control crime levels.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33624454148 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74713793661 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593886462882 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2089717754 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202558104569 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767425107709 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528226862666 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123955597196 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187294314557 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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