Some people believe that the best way to spend a holiday in a foreign country is to go out to meet people instead of staying in the hotel most of the time. what is your opinion? give reasons and include relevant examples from your own experience.
Vacation time in abroad place is great when people travel to outskirts in the local market instead of staying in a hotel is believed by some people. In my opinion, I agree with the notion that gives fabulous experience to the traveller is aware of the society, traditions, crowd and many more things.
Majority of foreign trips involves different religion and customs. Travelling from one country to another you will find the difference in many ways, by resting in the lounge will not benefit anyhow to the visitor. In a foreign visit, a person can make himself aware of their festivals, different means of entertainments and moreover social life of the people living there, where difference and similarities can be observed and compared to know in details.
Interaction with locals can help the visitor to know about the nature of food consumption and wearing style of clothes. Which somehow will convince that there are many similar things even though religions are different. For illustration, traveling from India Hindu nation to Kuwait Muslim nation, allow the person to believe that religion wise both the countries are completely different although the food consumption and means of entertainment are very similar like, chapatis are daily meal in both in regions, use of musical instruments like guitar in music composition and the role of music for the entertainment purpose is similar.
In conclusion, exploring the local market, and outskirt trips are the better way to spend holidays on the overseas trip which will expand the knowledge and remembered for the life time as it involves personal experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...nd the knowledge and remembered for the life time as it involves personal experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1825095057 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74594221423 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2174458366 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.444444444 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138584326534 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559681114267 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587420359585 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907009537579 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532210295046 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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