Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV or reading about them in the newspapers.
What is the reason for this?
Is it a good idea to copy famous personalities?
Ordinary people impersonate their idols after watching them on TV or reading about them on papers. They believe that these personalities are an epitome of success and excellence what they desire for themselves. I think it's a good idea to emulate their lifestyle or habits to ameliorate oneself but not to a level of obsession.
People have been nurturing some desires for a long time which they see being accomplished by their idols, therefore they want to imitate them. To give you a clear example, people always desire chiselled body with washboard abs and when their icons flaunt one; they follow regimes of those figures. Witnessing the exciting and interesting life of these people revives not only an already wanting desire but also new hopes for their own life. They aspire a perfect life portrayed by their heroes.
The motivation that inculcates by the observation of the life of these personalities is tremendously intoxicating. In my opinion, this strengthens the self-confidence of people to pursue their goal. People start putting an effort as they can envision their plan, for instance, they take up gym earnestly to get those six packs abs. However, it can be demoralizing as results are not always at par with their expectations. This could lead to severe depression and in fact, make them doubt their abilities and push them down the road of inferiority complex. On the other hand, some might make it an obsession and wear them out to the extent of no return. In either case, caution is advised.
In conclusion, if people understand that they don't fixate to their role-models transformation examples, instead work persistently towards their goal, they will succeed in their dreams too. They should pick a leaf out of these personas lifestyle but only by being aware of their limitations and the difference in settings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f but not to a level of obsession. People have been nurturing some desires ...
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Suggestion: personas'; persona's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12786885246 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81504767557 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616393442623 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9018440427 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164578122487 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606520763086 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679077674698 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121435670169 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942939734008 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.