Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
The biggest problem in urban areas around the globe is overpopulation. The major causes of this are industrialization and services or facilities which are easily available in that areas and the probable solution is that government should have to stop allotting land to new industries into cities and provide them a land in rural areas.
The main causes of overpopulation in urban cities is because of more and more companies have their offices there, so all people moved there from their areas to that city to get an employment. Because of most people are living there, so all the emergency services they can get very easily so they also do not want to leave that area. For example, University of London research report states that 70 percent of people in urban centers are from nearby rural areas and they are living there because of more employment opportunity and good services available in nearby.
The Solution of this problem is government should take initiative that they should avoid establishing new industries and company headquarters in major cities, so that population can diverted to villages or in small cities. Law enforcement agencies should add new law for multinational companies that they can only start their new businesses in the cities which are not population centric. They can start a campaign too to spread an awareness regarding overpopulation. For instance, a similar initiative in 2009, started by China in Beijing resulted a 30 percent decrease in population after 2009.
In conclusion, more employment opportunities and business establishment are the causes of the overpopulation and this problem can be solved if government took steps to divert that population into other areas of their country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... provide them a land in rural areas. The main causes of overpopulation in urban ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20714285714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97194363668 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489285714286 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1350932525 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.8 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20909008645 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088293122096 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798322565441 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147930016918 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719979233378 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.