Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
Nowadays, the population in developed areas is increasing day by day hence, some urban areas are suffering from the problem of overpopulation all over the world. This essay not only discusses the reasons behind this but also the measures that can be done to curb this problem.
To being with, the main reason behind the overpopulation of urban areas is migration. The people of undeveloped centres are shifting to developed areas owing to get better jobs and other facilities such as hospitals, elite education and many more. Therefore, they prefer to live in urban areas to secure their future as well as their new generation's. Further, multinational companies offer various jobs with cheap accommodation, which allure new generation more. For instance, a survey conducted by Punjabi University Patiala shows the report that 65% of the total population of the countryside area moved to big cities. Some of them shifted to receive good jobs and others to pursue their higher study in international colleges to get their dream job.
Every problem has seeds of solution within it, likewise, this problem can be solved by implementing various measures. Firstly, the government should open hospitals and educational institutes in remote areas grant similar facilities as urban areas. Secondly, the state authorities should promote multinational companies to open their branches in undeveloped areas. By doing so, the local people in these areas would like to stay in their home towns. Consequently, the native people will avoid moving to big cities. Finally, the government should provide hybrid seed to local farmers, along with this they should supply irrigation facilities and also increase the rate of their crops. Hence, people can obtain enough money to survive in less developed areas.
In conclusion, the shifting of people from remote areas to developed areas is the major cause of overpopulation in urban areas to obtain jobs and complete their higher education in good elite educational institutes. Still, this worrying concern can be tackled by the government to open education institutes, hospitals and encourage international companies to open their branches in undeveloped areas to offer jobs to native people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
...can be done to curb this problem. To being with, the main reason behind the overpo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84782623868 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4431577867 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.764705882 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221779875196 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712941321976 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919484683487 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15566039147 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896520736831 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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