It is undeniable that population has been increasing rapidly in developed cities. Many nations around the world are facing multiple issues due to this situation. There are several reasons for this, but certain measures could be taken to alleviate this problem.
There are number of causes for such a steep rise in these cities. The main cause of this problem is advanced technology and the vast opportunities offered to many. People who live in rural areas want to stay abreast with changing times and wish to seek better job opportunities with higher pay packages. For instance, metropolitan cities are highly competitive and due to inflation they usually offer higher remuneration when compared to villages. Also, these cities have better medical facilities and infrastructure. Nowadays, people definitely prefer living in better conditions and lifestyle. Therefore, they migrate from their place in search of such living conditions and opportunities. Moreover, such cities have better education system. Due to this, families move to such locations where their kids benefit for their future endeavors. Hence, if we look from the point of individual's perspective, they are definitely gaining via this shift. However, if we look from the point of global perspective, this move is leading to social imbalance and causing a major problem.
Various courses of action could be taken to tackle the above. In the first place, governments around the world could set aside a budget to refurbish such rural areas and develop better facilities like schools, hospitals etc so that there is no inherent need to move to another location in search of better facilities. Also, they could bring awareness among people through nationwide campaigns and encourage people to live in their own areas with certain incentives. For example, if children buying their first property near their parent's house they will be eligible for government grants. This in turn will be a big carrot for the first time owners to stay and reside nearby rather than looking to move out of their place.
In conclusion, various factors have led to overpopulation in metropolitan cities, but this situation could be addressed by governments intervention with development of rural areas and with certain incentives to be offered to the younger generation living in such areas. Given this situations, steps should be taken immediately to maintain socio-cultural equilibrium.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ut this situation could be addressed by governments intervention with development of rural ...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... generation living in such areas. Given this situations, steps should be taken immed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36553524804 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83544422412 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55091383812 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0130885272 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2380952381 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211622065091 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664497329967 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800850776933 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151300515527 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739107627029 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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