Urbanization is the new inevitable global problem impacting the life of local citizen of the area. People from remote areas are moving to urban areas at the alarming rate, causing dreadful impact the life of people. Overpopulation in urban are leads to numerous problem such as pollution, traffic, reduced government aid, infrastructure, etc.
In my perspective traffic is one of the major problems. A survey suggest that increase in number of vehicle in the urban areas is directly portioned to the increase in the number human habitat in the urban areas , which has increased to the alarming rate of 80% in last five years. Increased traffic on the road leads to many inevitable problems such as increased travel time, accidents, air and sound pollution, global warming, etc. traffic jams.
Strong measures are need to control the ever increasing problem. Government being a controlling body must take appropriate action to resolve this alarming problem. I would suggest, some steps to be taken towards the greater availability of better and cheap public transport , encourage usages of rented mobikes or cycles for shorter distances by increasing their availability, Higher car loan rates. Along with this , there should be better management of traffic by having more traffic control in peak traffic hours. Have a day as No Vehicle day. As a civic of the country, we should also take few steps to resolve the high priority problem. Carpooling can reduced the problem of traffic to many folds. Another small step be to avoid use of vehicles for smaller distances.
Recapitulating, traffic problem caused by urbanization can be resolved by the joint effort of government and public, thus bringing reduced travel time
- Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion. 61
- Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion 75
- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems? 73
- In many countries, people have many health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how it can be solved? Give relevant examples from your experience. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23104693141 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80473133422 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3743529986 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192058934194 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658090735163 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573002841258 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128197002527 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473240638296 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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