Parents of obese children should be punished for making their children fat. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that whether parents should face legal consequences if their children are obese. This essay agrees with the statement because obese children cannot lead normal childhood due to overweight and obesity can cause serious diseases in long term.
Overweight children face difficulty in carrying out routine tasks due to excess fat in body. Obesity has direct impact on person’s physical strength as the high accumulation of fat is frequently associated with functional incapacity. When normal activities are hindered by this condition, how can a child play or do any fun activity? Even a recent study done by WHO showed that obese children are 70% less active than normal-weighted children as obesity has dire effect on muscular system.
Another reason for taking strong steps is that heavy weight caused by fat can result in dreadful health conditions. Ramification of obesity does not stop to difficult mobility but it also harms cardiovascular system, urinary system, metabolic system and overall whole body. This can be life threatening for anyone. A study on obesity done by University of California produced shocking results. It stated that obese kids are at high risk of heart failure at an early age and if not steps taken on time the damage is irreversible, this means suffering for whole life.
In conclusion, mothers and fathers should face repercussions if their kids are overweight because obese children cannot live normal life and their future is also in danger due to obesity affecting most of the systems in the body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
... reason for taking strong steps is that heavy weight caused by fat can result in dreadful he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21115537849 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78795090973 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8571472083 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302830688338 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106456051835 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067713458585 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190594457313 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548594990467 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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