In Today's world, Manual skills like designing own clothes or repairing household items are degrading. In fact, in some countries, these skills are started diminishing. Do you think this is a good sign for our furture? Let us discuss the reasons for the downfall in these skillsets. There is no denying, it goes cent percent true for my country, India as well.
First of all, Earlier both, husband and wife were not working, it was husband in most of the cases, Hence people used to get enough time to learn and do household related activities, Resulting in doing the work on their own. For example, my grandmother was a housewife, thus she used to make clothes for her sons like undergarments,woollen sweaters and scarfs.
Secondly, Nowadays, people are earning more, so they afford cheap labour having these skills instead of trying it to get it done by themselves, As a result, they reduce their chance of learning it. For instance, whenever any fan or pipe needs repairing, I simply call plumber or electrician rather than doing it by myself.
Thirdly, people are not required to do these task manually because of new high tech machines doing it fast and accurately, which results in involvement of machines, not the humans. Let us take an example, my mother learned to make soft toys in her shcool but she always preferred to buy it for me from the shop. Though she wanted to make it up for me, However, she did not due to lack of time. Thus people opt for easy and fast options for these activities.
To conclude, Although manual work has reduced, we are getting our work done fast and easily. However, we should take out time to perform these little tasks, not to earn money but just to be less dependent on others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , woollen
... clothes for her sons like undergarments,woollen sweaters and scarfs. Secondly, Nowad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70394736842 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59873417673 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0827650866 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204177277552 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698010462956 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603585097251 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109119474239 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754123025874 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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