People are buying more and more things that they do not actually need.
How do you think, what are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative trend (for an individual and/ or the society overall?)
Purchasing unnecessary artifacts have become a tendency of many contemporary customers. In my opinion, availability of lots of attractive and cheap products are the reasons of this type of situation, which is an unacceptable movement from an individual because in most of time, it effects those people who are in need. In the long run, it will have a holistic undesirable impact on the society.
Eye-catching stuffs and low cost of these products are the typical examples of the excessive procurement related issues that can baffle the consumers to collect those at a time. Nowadays, there are a lot of ecommerce websites are available on the internet which is designed with various colorful materials. They offer of an opportunity to look at those items in couple of minutes. To increase the sales, these articles are sold in a discount rate. So, noticeable kits and economical value trigger the buyers to make the collection of unneeded materials.
Furthermore, a mind to show off to others is another reason for having unimportant ingredients. For instance, a person, who has a lot money, always tries to maintain a level. As a result, he has an attraction to buy the rare products, which are not commonly used and available, and after some time, it is replaced with another one.
Individual or society both are affected because of the unconscious nature of having assets. A person generally will become very self-centered, if he wants to have everything from the market. The positive approach of sharing with others will be minimized, which will create a chaos among the people and lead to the unexpected situation, and needy one will not get proper support. Overall, the society has to face difficulty to control its dwellers.
In conclusion, unnecessary investment is always undesirable, specifically, to buy unwanted things as it effects not only the person who is doing it but his society as well. I think as a human being of a civilized society, we need to be conscious about this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95848991421 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588588588589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3806990599 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4705882353 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168968778981 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434120231718 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444587710504 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889348360726 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450154788749 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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