People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken to fix this?
Nowadays, the level of fitness has decreased in comparison to what the people in the earlier days had achieved. There are a number of factors which are the reason for the decline in the level of fitness and there are some measures to tackle this problem as well. The essay will deal with the reasons of lack of fitness in the present generation as well as the means to overcome the said problem.
On the one hand, the present generation has access to a wide variety of better things in comparison to their older counterparts. However, there is no denying that the present generation lacks in terms of health and fitness when compared to the elders. There are many reasons for the said problem. Moreover, the lifestyle today is a stressful once and is one of the nub of the problem. The generation today is so caught up with their work that there is no time to devote for their own physical development which has been ignored to an extent that the level of fitness has suffered drastically and has reached tremendously low. For instance, in a study conducted by the University of Bradford whereby they evaluated people born in 1950, 1970 and 1990 had found that the person born in 1990’s had less stamina to do things in comparison with the older counterparts. Therefore, it can be said that the issue needs to be addressed relatively faster before it reaches a point of no return.
On the other hand, the problem which is being faced by the present generation of lack of overall fitness has to be addressed as it is an alarming situation. As such, the people need to start taking out time from their normal routine and indulge themselves in some form of physical activity which shall help them to gain the stamina to perform well. The government need to form certain policies to make sure that the people are not made to work like machines as it has a bad impact on their overall well being which cannot be compensated in any manner. Thus, the measures are to be adopted and implemented to cater to the urgent needs of the people before it is too late.
In conclusion, the level of fitness has decreased due to the increase in the level of stress and many other reasons. However, effectively dealing with the issues can result in improved stamina. It is said that once health is lost, everything is lost. As such, it is high time to act upon the issues and address them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58548009368 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49652886063 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44262295082 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3345660615 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.777777778 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7222222222 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207128095466 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621998976031 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545968027974 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12346660561 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704861452339 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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